Haha, it's actually really, really neat. I'm kind of jealous because it's short but self-contained, something which is very hard for me. It's sometimes hard to come up with something other than a story, which could span chapters and chapters, so it's nice to see a short, intense bit of meaningful and well-written piece of writing ♥

(and that's actually closer to what I wanted to say when I first read it, but you know how it is when you read something and have no idea how to phrase what you felt or thought about it XD)